-I'm just gonna say I don't like the dialogue. "Did you ever just wish you could be two people?" Sigh. He IS two people! Do you think he was born with eyes that big?!
-Why did Spidey shove MJ off the side? He wouldn't do that. That's just being an ass.
-Y'know Harry, when you tell people to "look out" and "move," you should do the same. (Whatever, it was all a dream.)
-"My regular rate is fine, actually." WTF? He was offering you a RAISE you idiot. You never turn down a raise. No wonder you're broke.
-So wait, if Spider-Man has fought Kraven before, why is he only appearing now? Why couldn’t we have seen their first encounter when it happened? Why couldn’t the have put that in the first episode?
-Isn't that crossbow awfully big for shooting DARTS?

oh an since when is spiderman some big player who just wants casual relationships. no peter parker is always head over heels with mj they have problems here an there an date others in between but there is no peter playing mj and mj being ok with it for a long time. what really??