Killer storyline, great animation. More cursing, quirkiness and deadpan humor, if you would. I'd like to see some of Firefly and Deadwood's characteristics worked in.....
Animation is excellent, but I wonder if a different stylization might be effective. I was really put off by the oddball art of House of Five Leaves when I first saw it, but the individuality of the style really help set the series apart......
Really enjoyed episodes one and two. Relativism is one big bite to try to chew, and I think you guys are doing it already. Your work is edgy. How about developing that aspect of mysticism you've got going through little things like quirky scoring, non seqiturs and periods of uncomfortable silence? There's nothing wrong with a formulaic storyline, but if the tale deals with the supernatural, you know there's going to have to be some twistedness.....