Whew. Interesting docu -- shows horror sells better than weepy. Joe just seems obsessive compulsive, and his persona doesn't fit into the Hollyweird network as well as David, who actually succeeded in getting his screenplay produced into a movie! Wow! His story was actually encouraging and exciting--like a dream come true, which indeed it was! He seemed the most balanced of the three writers for sure, and with, no doubt, the best script of the bunch. Deborah, weepy Deborah, with her Nam Myoho Rengay Kyo chanting, and full-on company of people already casting Adrien Brody in their dreams? well--let's have some more rum...and...PIZZA! Thank you! Hold the anchovies. A good short-story can become opted--much easier; and then a screenplay done--as Brokeback Mountain which first appeared in New Yorker magazine. This is a very difficult industry to break into; verrrry difficult. And success comes so often from networking and who you know. Then the story idea has to be really good, interesting, different, catchy--and the writing pretty darn savvy, too. Ain't easy.

This was so very well done. You can decide this when you start to realize that there was yet so much more to tell. The characters, though real, were so intersting and complex, that it would not be a stretch to keep adding to the story. A serirs could be considered with this story line. Thank you. Enjoyed.

-Stop dressing like it's the 70's
-Everybody eats too much pizza which clogs their system and deprives them of a clear mind to writeConclusion: get a real paying job that actually contributes to the economy

Never once, in all the back-breaking, soul-corroding, terrifying pursuit of a dream did any of those wanna be writers think to ask the movie going public what they would like to watch. Just General Motors - "What's good for General Motors is good for America" attitude. I have no time for anyone, in any business that doesn't bust their butts finding out what is needed or desired.Just to make myself good and wrong, there are those films that come out of the blue, breaking every mold in the industry, that are total winners and done with no survey anywhere. So there!

All of these indie screen writers should:1. Be confident.
2. Learn from (and use) criticism.
3. Dress less 80s.
4. Work faster!
5. Get over themselves.
6. Be more collaborative.The published screen writer comments were great!